Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Snowball Attack

Snowball Attack

Just about there… So close! Causly I lift the bar that stops you from falling. So close… Just about there… I leap of the chair lift.. I fall for what feels like hours… Suddenly I reach the ground and start to snowboard. Then out of nowhere I get hit by a snowball Luke was laughing loudly. Luckily I did not fall. Oh no i am going to fast cannon boom!!! Ouch my leg!

Yay the chair lift, ouch the excruciating.

1 comment:

  1. Awesome story Kieran!! The best one I have read on your blog so far! So much suspense and excitement in the first half, laughing in the middle, and a cringe at the end! Great writing - thanks for sharing this Kieran!
    (Might need to re-look at the last line though).